I was reading some Japanese Haiku (in translation) and had to have a go.
Not quite haiku which should be 3 lines with 5, 7, 5 syllables (17 total).
1.
Enveloped by a dark
Where your mind cannot tell
If your eyes are open
2.
Hiss and crackle in the glass
Of whiskey pouring on to icy rocks
Anticipating contentment
3.
A library in my hand
But no rustling of turning pages
Oddly disconcerting
4.
Beyond known and unknown
Lie the when and what and where and why
Of the unknowable
5.
Roaring deafening winds
But in the eye of the storm
The silence is music
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